oh wow I can't wait to see it finished. It looks amazing already!

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WAiting to see finished piece* wags tail* hehe

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Awesome.

You may want to work on Her right arm and hand- the pose is fairly akward. Would it be possible to rework the arm and hand as if she were reaching up to touch the other characters face?

Her eyes look very 'bored' and lack emotion. I'm not sure what the mood is supposed to be here, but it seems aggressive and dominating. If she is being the subordinant character, try giving her more of a look of fear, squint the eyes, bring the brows together, puff up the muscles below the eyes (not the cheeks!), and maybe drop the mouth open just a tad.

You may also want to work on the posing and weight of her lower half :f It's not heavy and seems to have a 'slipping' look to it as if she's not completely stable on her own feet.

don't kill me :F

You know, I thought her hand might have looked a tad wonky. I'll definitely work on that one. Thanks for pointing it out, it really solidified my original opinion!

Well, it's a complicated piece...it's not about dominance and submission or even really love in the conventional sense. The male is a very aggressive personality and the female is very passive, neither is subordinate as they are both parts of the same whole. Well, you could probably get Kaha to explain it to you better than I could! *is dumb*

As for the stances, they are supposed to look like they are standing almost effortlessly...this is supposed to be a spiritual piece, so I thought that having them grounded would lessen that feel. I'll try to work on her legs a bit though to make them not look so wonky.

Thanks for the candid opinions, they are always appreciated and helpful!

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I figured that the female would be passive, which is why I mentioned about the subordination (I couldnt think of the word for it) and her emotions. It is just that her expression is pretty placid in the face and could use a little tweaking.

Hmm...as far as the pose goes, it just seems that the male is fully grounded but the female is slipping. I wouldnt know what to do with the myself either

And for some reason when I try and use the apostrophe on my keyboard, the search option shows up >:E

That looks awesome, I can't wait to see it when it's finished.

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Haha, don't worry Shadow...you described their relationship as a whole quite well. ;}
It is indeed true that Kaz is more aggressive, and KaHa is more passive. ^^

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